Forgotten: D&D style text RPG 12+

Exactly what I was looking for. Of course I wish it had more chapters, but even for the six, it’s still a great adventure.

I’m taking away one star for the TYPOS - with such a game which is completely text-based; there’s no space for typos. Yet somehow there are plenty here. Whole instead of hole. Lack of commas after quotes. Two dots instead of three. How is it possible that you haven’t ran the game through a spell check is beyond me. The story is really well written so there shouldn’t be any space for mistakes.

Anyway, I just strongly hope there will be a sequel. Well done guys, I wish there was moooore!

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! We're delighted to hear that you enjoyed the adventure, and your feedback is invaluable to us.



We genuinely appreciate your keen eye for detail, and we apologize for any typos that slipped through. With a text-based game as expansive as ours, totaling over 800 pages, it can be challenging to catch every single error. However, your observations are noted, and we'll certainly strive to enhance the proofreading process for future releases.



Your encouragement means a lot to us. Thank you for your support, if you have any further suggestions or thoughts, please feel free to share them with us on contact@inkruby.com. Happy gaming!

I want to give some constructive feedback because I feel this game has potential but it needs work.
Firstly please proof read your writing, some of the spelling is wrong and some of the grammar is bad. Nothing worse than having to figure out what a word is because it’s spelt wrong.
Second there is far too much writing. I know it’s meant to be a story driven game, but no one wants to read pages of text. Just some understanding to get to the next area.
Third the stats, having 1 stat point for each stat type is so long winded. You will inevitably lose in certain sections because the stats don’t add up and it just becomes frustrating. It needs to be more straightforward and user friendly.
Finally the choices. Why is there a choice to go (left or right). There’s a section where you’re told left left right or something and in that situation it’s fine because it’s a memory short game. However having pointless choices such as left or right or up or down really doesn’t provide much of an experience for the player. Give them an informed option (such as in delight games), where they can make a life or death decision but they’re actually intuitive not just directional.

Thank you for taking the time to write such a detailed review. It is much appreciated. I will try to address some of your feedback here:

Spelling and grammar: We recognize this issue and are working on a solution. As non-native English speakers, it can be hard to pinpoint these errors, so we are exploring other options.

To much writing: We aimed for something that feels like a mix between an interactive book and a game, so there are currently no plans to reduce the text size.

Stats: Point taken. It's something that we should look into.

Choices: I'm sorry you felt the choices were pointless. A simple choice, like left or right, can actually change the path you take quite drastically, even if it’s not a 'life or death' decision. One of my personal criticisms of the Delight Games stories I’ve tried is that, no matter whether you go 'left or right,' you’re always kept on the same path. That’s something we tried to do differently with this game.

It’s fun and nice but I can’t seem to load the second chapter

Could you please contact me at contact@inkruby.com with a screenshot.I will do everything I can to help me. Please let me know if you made a purchase already.